Tuesday, 19 March 2019

The ants and the grasshopper

Its a cold winter night 

Its freezing 

The ants are safe under ground

The ants have food and drinks

The grasshopper ate their food in summer 

The grasshoppers are pigs 

The grasshoppers are selfish 

Its freezing like Antarctica  

2 comments:

  1. Well done Bubba. It is so cool how you changed the entertaining story into an informative list. You must have thought hard about what the purpose of the writing was going to be to help you do this.

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