I am a Year 6 student at Park Estate School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Ruma 4 and my teacher is Sally Avern.
Tuesday, 19 March 2019
The ants and the grasshopper
Its a cold winter night Its freezing The ants are safe under ground The ants have food and drinks The grasshopper ate their food in summer The grasshoppers are pigs The grasshoppers are selfish Its freezing like Antarctica
Well done Bubba. It is so cool how you changed the entertaining story into an informative list. You must have thought hard about what the purpose of the writing was going to be to help you do this.
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Well done Bubba. It is so cool how you changed the entertaining story into an informative list. You must have thought hard about what the purpose of the writing was going to be to help you do this.
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